Misspellings: 1. Sunny is not clear; 2. Sightseeing is not a tour; 3. Parks are not public circles; 4. Flowing is not endless; 5. Lush is not in a hurry (there are five misspellings here, not including the repetition of &”;public circles&”; in &”;tourists are endless in public circles&”;, and not including the word &”;lush&”; with two onions … On an autumn Sunday, the weather is clear (. All kinds of red flowers are in bloom, including chrysanthemums, lilies and wintersweet ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. () (8 typos, 2 punctuation errors and 3 inappropriate) Inappropriate: 1. All kinds of red flowers are in bloom, including chrysanthemums, lilies and wintersweet (all kinds of flowers are in conflict with red flowers, so they should be changed to all kinds of flowers) 2. Lush describes lush vegetation. It is a bit inappropriate to match the scene. Change it to a thriving sc: (xinxin: describe the vigorous growth of vegetation; Rong: Lush. Describe the lush vegetation. Metaphor is the cause of vigorous development, prosperity. ) 3. There is no wintersweet in autumn, which is inconsistent with the reality. It should be made by other flowers themselves. My personal opinion does not include all the typos: 1. Sunny is not clear. 2. Sightseeing is not a tour. 3. Parks are not round. 4. Flowing is not endless. 5. Lush is not hasty. Punctuation: 1. I can&;t help but say: What attractive autumn colors are! I can&;t help but say, &”;What attractive autumn colors!&”; 2. On a clear Sunday in autumn, our family went to visit Beihai Gongyuan together. It was changed to a clear Sunday in autumn, and our family went to visit Beihai Gongyuan together. Inappropriate: 1. All kinds of red flowers are in bloom. 2. I can&;t help but say: What attractive autumn colors! I can&;t help but say: What attractive autumn colors! 3. A Sunday in autumn. Change it to: a Sunday in autumn.